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She's an Angel. Lovely black hair, eyes like Cleopatra, and a smile that lights up the room

The prettiest face you could imagine

She's working behind the bar, and ALL the guys are drooling.

I have plenty of time, "there's no rush" I think in my head

I walk over to the bar and tell her "I want the best drink you've ever made

She makes the best drink I've ever tasted, and I'm naturally impressed

The End, Tada!

Its not really written by me, I found it on a magazine.

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breathtakingly beautiful!

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Um ... that's not really a poem, as amusing as it is.

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it's not a favorite... but it's ok i guess, it really depends on the depth of the poetry, and to me this doesn't seem very deep...

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sounds like a joke or a pathetic attempt to chat the girl up. i can tell u this...and i think i can speak for most girls when i say...that ...that would make no girl melt inside or would take you seriously. sound like some guy who got drunk form drinking beer and though he'd write a poem on the back of the bill!

sorry to be blunt...but i gotta be honist here!

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i like the first 2 lines where he talks about her.Her hair ,her eyes, her face.Very nice description.the rest i don't like .Sorry.

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Yeah, the end "Tada!" kind of threw me off